Some group feedback for our work so far. I want to convey my trepidation of London, and to communicate that it doesn't mean a hugh amount to me. The general feedback was ok in terms of technique but I think most people agreed that it needed more iconography from London and from the actual journey in order to stay truer to the brief. The use of the leaves doesn't create an atmosphere of intimidation at all, instead lightening the mood of the image, also its a bit of an obvious photoshop technique, gotta stop any of that business!.
more London icons
more originality
more intimidation
more images
street signs??
tube map??
graffiti??
darker iconography - violence, crime, agro
more crowded, cluttered
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